PAD Day 15 – Use Those Words

Robert gave us a list of words to use in a poem, specifically using at least four of the words in a poem. We could use all of them, but that was too ambitious for my tastes. The words were ‘flat, ring, lavish, vessel, paper, blacklist, gaudy, and tooth.’

lilac Syringa vulgaris in bloom

lilac Syringa vulgaris in bloom (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

Tossed Lilac Blooms

The wind tossed the lilac blooms
like lavish paper flowers on the floor
Crumpled tissue paper on green carpet.
Now what was once maybe gaudy
is withering in the sunlight.
Lay them flat in a book
Pressing the rainfall scent
into the pages, until the crackled
petals fall into a heap on the floor
as you open the forgotten book
and realize you now have to
clean up scattered springtime.

I could not use blacklist or tooth, but every other word worked for either one of these poems. Ambitious in my opinion.
If She Said Yes

The ring is a vessel of his love
Told in lavish words of glitter
As sunlight approves this union
With a gaudy show of sparkles
On the flat white wall
Sign the papers and post the banns
And may way for a marked procession
Just so long as she said yes…….

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